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Rikochet

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They always say

I should take

One step at a time

 

What if

I didn’t listen

I didn’t care

 

What if

I did walk

The whole road

 

How can one

Measure another’s

Freedom of movement

 

How can we

Criticize another’s

Freedom of movement

 

I say

We walk the whole road

‘till the end

 

I say

The steps are measured

By one’s perception

 

I propose

To change

To alter

To discomfort

To find

To search

To hunt

To catch

To dream

 

I suppose

It isn’t so

Difficult

 

I take

For granted

What you don’t clearly see

 

I say

We surrender ourselves

In another’s Entropy

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Όσο το διάβαζα νόμιζα ότι άκουγα τον Κeenan να το τραγουδάει. :thmbup: Πολύ καλός αν και αν το πηγαίνεις για τραγούδι, δε νομίζω ότι ο ρυθμός είναι ομοιόμορφος.

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Ρίκο ξέρεις πόσο δύσκολα μου αρέσει ένα ποίημα και μάλιστα αγγλικό;

Μάλλον ξέρεις.

Ε τότε ξέρεις τι σημαίνει πως μου άρεσε. 100%

Και σαν επιλογή λέξεων, και η απλότητά του, και το νόημά του, και ο τρόπος γραφής, η στοίχιση των λέξεων.

Μπράβο.

Βγήκε χωρίς κανένα ζόρι, δεν είχες καημό να γράψεις με το στανιό, είναι ελεύθερο και με αέρα.

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