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Midnight Tides (Trull's Doubting)


Rikochet

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Με αυτό το ποίημα κλείνει ή 'άτυπη' τριλογία, της οποίας πρώτο μέρος είναι το Eternity, και δεύτερο το Remembrance (Burning).

 

The Empty Throne

Has found a new emperor.

 

He shall rule;

He shall conquer;

He shall bring a new era.

 

I question myself:

Is this what we have longed for?

Are all our ambitions

Interweaved in one’s will?

 

Are all our interests

Joined in one’s fate?

Did we choose this emperor of ours

To take our destiny in his hands?

 

Must all voices expressing doubt,

Be drowned in cold, indifferent, silence?

Must we all forge our forsaken souls

Into an ironclad fist?

 

Of answers,

I have none.

 

I weep,

I grieve,

I wither.

 

For my people;

For our fate.

 

And I fear there will be a time

When all

Shall weep,

Shall grieve,

Shall wither.

 

The midnight tides are closing;

We shall perish.

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Ειναι υπέροχο. Το διαβάζω και το ξαναδιαβάζω, δεν έχει τρύπες, είναι όμορφο, έχει συνοχή, είναι ποίημα χωρίς να το εμποδίζει αυτό να γίνει κάποτε μουσική... Και φυσικά μου αρέσουν αυτά που εννοείς και λες.

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Beyond my reach...

 

Είναι ωραίο, σίγουρα.

Το διαβάζω σαν πεζό σχεδόν... κάτι δεν πάει καλά. Ούτ'εγώ πάω πολύ καλά, αυτή τη στιγμή...

 

:(

Edit: Θα το έγραφα σαν πεζώ. Shoot me.

 

 

Οι Μούσες μαζί σου,

-Ορφέας

Edited by Orpheus
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Υπέροχη ολοκλήρωση της τριλογίας, γεμάτη συγκρατημένη απαισιοδοξία και μελαγχολία! Όμορφα δομημένη γλώσσα (όπως πάντα)...

Άρτιος λυρισμός...

Απλά...υπέροχο!

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