Orpheus Posted September 3, 2005 Share Posted September 3, 2005 or is it perhaps just prose? perhaps, perhaps...] There is nothing but pain in this world; anything can be analyzed into small, cold fragments of pain, and, if not, their fragments can be analyzed into small, painful shards. All we live or live for is in vain; and thus all benevolence is also in vain, and mischief for the love of gain is as vain. And yet, I would never have it that I would obey to the interests of this World, to the Great Cause that does not exist; let the World forsake what it will; I will live a benevolent life, and my seed will be blest. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nienna Posted September 3, 2005 Share Posted September 3, 2005 I disagree. But... I love your choice. ----- Είναι καλογραμμένο, αν και μάλλον πάει περισσότερο προς το prose. Αυτό βέβαια δεν είναι αυτόματα κακό. Καθόλου. Θα μπορούσε να είναι ο μονόλογος ενός χαρακτήρα... Έχω σκιαγραφήσει μερικές δομές χαρακτήρων που θα του ταίριαζαν. Νομίζω πως και συ διαφωνείς κατά βάθος... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordCeleborn Posted September 3, 2005 Share Posted September 3, 2005 (edited) Εγω παλι δεν θα ειμαι καθολου ευγενικος. Oλοι εχουν δικαιωμα στον λογο αλλα πιστευω οτι μερικα πραγματα δεν ειναι βγαλμενα απο την ψυχη σου σε αυτο το κειμενο. Ειναι μεσα απο φιλτρα μιας μικρης πνευματικης θολουρας και κολληματων. Θα ηταν μια καλη συμβουλη να μαθεις να ενδοσκοπεις περισσοτερο πισω απο τα τοιχοι της λογικης και χωρις το αρμα της παρανοιας οταν θελεις να δεις μεσα σου. (οχι δεν κανεις το δευτερο απλα συμβουλη) οκ, το παρακανα. And about this "seed" of yours... Bleesed I know not, cursed either but definatelly fed in blood. Edited September 3, 2005 by LordCeleborn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Orpheus Posted September 3, 2005 Author Share Posted September 3, 2005 Fed in blood? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordCeleborn Posted September 4, 2005 Share Posted September 4, 2005 (edited) We are all vampires aren't we in this world? Others may seek blood made of molecules and others seek of feelings, others again feed in flesh. Thus the question stands; if blood stands for feelings what flesh is standing for? And again my beloved, what is a seed if not our future, and if the world forsake what the future might hold for our life - cause we might determine what is there to be, and what is not - but judges (we) never were and never not. Alas, in blood we feed others more and others less - but still we suck each others blood. And in vain our life is not since we wake up to feed every day (or night) in vain we don't - but we hope - Hope, do you remember my beloved - HOPE - With love Romeo, Edited September 4, 2005 by LordCeleborn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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