Rikochet Posted September 11, 2005 Share Posted September 11, 2005 Άλλη μια μαλακία απο τις άπειρες της Β.Π. ---- Exchange words devoid of depth Then seal your thoughts with joy Profound but empty In no way put into action But born in seeds of apathy Born in seeds of disgust Dead in seeds of apathy Dead in seeds of disgust Frail sentiments just got thinner With the coming of a perfect-circled thought Though your cries, along with rhymes Unheard but read in sheepish glances Distracted from your meaningless dances This path you tread will never be complete This completion you seek will never be enough Stand naked in the face of the storm Recollect memories and let them fly away Let them fly away Undress yourself from sympathy And jump Feeling free now, fear abandons Falling fast, the concrete’s near Contact sheer with compact stone Even dead, your thoughts more clear Than ever Made in layers of apathy Made in layers of disgust Broken in shards of apathy Broken in shards of disgust Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nihilio Posted September 11, 2005 Share Posted September 11, 2005 Σε τραγούδι πιστεύω θα έβγαινε πολύ καλό. Τώρα ως σχέτες λέξεις σε χαρτι του λείπει κάτι... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tec-goblin Posted September 11, 2005 Share Posted September 11, 2005 Συμφωνώ με το nihilio.... Δημιουργεί εικόνες, αλλά δεν λέει μια πολύ ξεχωριστή ιστορία. Οπότε, ναι, καλύτερα για τραγούδι. Όπου η φωνή, η χροιά, ο τονισμός, μπορούν να πουν πράγματα που δεν φαίνονται στις λέξεις από μόνες τους. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gothicbutterfly Posted September 16, 2005 Share Posted September 16, 2005 (edited) Συμφωνώ και με τους 2. Και κάτι δυνατό,άγρια φωνητικά,και απόκοσμη μουσική...ταιριάζει... Υ.Γ. Β.Π. = ? Edited September 16, 2005 by gothicbutterfly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nihilio Posted September 16, 2005 Share Posted September 16, 2005 Βιβλιοθήκη Ποίησης και όχι Βόρεια Προάστεια Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nienna Posted September 20, 2005 Share Posted September 20, 2005 Αν αυτό είναι μαλακία της Β.Π. τότε μ'αρέσουν οι μαλακίες της Β.Π. ... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.