Rikochet Posted May 11, 2006 Share Posted May 11, 2006 Licked the tears away from your eyes, Eyeballs tasted bitter. The wrinkles full of blood and history. Map of regret. I regret my approach. Steps and reckless rust and rusty blade and reckless steps. Organic, (s)he, curves open up. Reveal. Map of regret. I regret wearing my skin. The bones shatter when the sun/hammer/saw/sun Dances on my fingers and on the cold body. Death Does not exist. Just sent the soul away. Keep the body, send the soul away. Spilled blood never smelt better. Saved my agony for later (use). Collected the tools, remembered the lone letter. M for ______. I never committed murder. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RaspK Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 Φρικιαστικό μ' ένα ψυχρό τρόπο που δεν μπορώ να κατατάξω. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nienna Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 Rasp, το σχόλιό σου είναι σαν περιγραφή τρομακτικού όντος του Lovecraft. :tongue: [σχόλιο για το ποίημα λίγο αργότερα] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Celestial Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 (edited) καλο ηταν (ομολογω οτι οταν ειδα τον τιτλο πριμενα να δω Μ for Μ*****ς (σορι για την εκφραση αγαπητοι moderators αλλα αυτο μου ηρθε ) Edited May 12, 2006 by Celestial Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nihilio Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 καλο ηταν (ομολογω οτι οταν ειδα τον τιτλο πριμενα να δω Μ for Μ*****ς (σορι για την εκφραση αγαπητοι moderators αλλα αυτο μου ηρθε ) Και κάποιοι από τους αγαπητούς moderatorts αυτό ακριβώς σκέφτηκαν... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RaspK Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 Θα φανώ ψώνιο λέγοντας πως περίμενα ακριβώς αυτό στ' οποίο αναφέρεται, αλλά παίζει, μάλλον, ρόλο το λεξιπαίγνιο redrum... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nihilio Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 R for Redrum; Το πρότεινα κι εγώ στον Ρίκο όταν προτοδιάβασα το ποιήμα. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balidor Posted May 13, 2006 Share Posted May 13, 2006 Και εγω το Μ Φορ Μ___ς περιμενα, χαχαχαχα !!! Πολυ καλα, πραγματικά... ΠΟΛΥ ΠΟΛΥ καλο... !!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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