Rikochet Posted October 25, 2004 Share Posted October 25, 2004 (edited) Ένα τραγούδι/ποίημα που έγραψα πριν απο λίγο, σε μια ξαφνική έμπνευση. (Οι Opeth-ικές επιρροές είναι σαφείς ). Witness, witness death, don't care Regard, regard without emotion, do not even dare, Wake up, wake up, fool, it wasn't a nightmare, Fire fire inside you, you could even call it hell The void inside you (the void in all of us) Devouring and flaying you, (consuming all of us) Don't look in the mirror (don't look in the broken glass) The Monster you'll face (the Monster in all of us) Run, run from this carnival, this carnival of madness, Fly, fly up high, away from us all, Away, away from this place of eternal darkness, Escape, try to escape from what's in you, can't look what's in us all The void inside you (the void in all of us) Devouring and flaying you, (consuming all of us) Don't look in the mirror (don't look in the broken glass) The Monster you're facing (the Monster in all of us) Distance, the distance is lessening for you, lessening for you alone, Hunted, you're hunted eternally, by your inner self, Dying, you're dying painfully, you're finally all alone, The Monster, in the End you see the Monster, it's your soul itself The void inside you (the void in all of us) Devouring and flaying you, (consuming all of us) Don't look in the mirror (don't look in the broken glass) The Monster you've faced (the Monster in all of us) Edited October 25, 2004 by Rikochet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nihilio Posted October 25, 2004 Share Posted October 25, 2004 Τα κουπλέ δεν έχουν τον ίδιο αριθμό συλλαβών, άρα ούτε και τον ίδιο ρυθμό. Οπότε είτε θα αλλάζεις τη μελωδία όταν τραγουδάς, είτε θα κάνεις κάποιο μαγικό για να τραγουδηθεί. ΚΡΑΤΑΤΕ ΡΥΘΜΟ ΡΕ ΟΤΑΝ ΓΡΑΦΕΤΕ ΣΤΙΧΟΥΣ!!! Κατά τα άλλα οι στίχοι είναι υπέροχοι. Να είχαμε και τη μουσικη... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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