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The lost who is not lost

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Elsanor

The lost who is not lost

 

 

 

I walk in a dark alley; dumped, littered, filthy.

 

I wear black; only black.

 

My hair flutter unkempt in the evening breeze.

 

I have suffered much, endured even more.

 

Now, I just walk.

 

There were times I fought.

 

And tried not to fall.

 

I loved everyone. Then I hated everyone.

 

Agony and anger in my heart.

 

Now all I want is to be left alone.

 

I have no wish to fight, have abandoned hope.

 

I just walk towards nowhere.

 

And I feel the air through my hair.

 

Embraced my own destruction.

 

Then I hear a child laughing.

 

The happiness in my heart is painful.

 

Transformed by the black despair into agonizing pain.

 

I break. I cry. I wish not to be anymore.

 

I lament my former life, my latter choice.

 

Now, I just walk.

 

A dark figure condemned to wandering.

 

In the very heart of the place I hated most.

 

I let my consciousness spread.

 

I open myself to all feelings from everywhere.

 

I stay there, forever.

 

Lost in the merciful embrace of oblivion…

Edited by Elsanor

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Βάρδος

Ελσάνορα, παρατηρώ μια άψογη ανάλυση ψυχοσύνθεσης, αναμιγμένη με ένα εξίσου καλό ύφος γραφής.

 

Επίσης, νομίζω ότι παρατηρώ επιρροές του Βορειοβρόχη. ;)

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northerain

mpa ego den ksero xristo apo poihsh.

oraios elsanor... :p gamato

(kati na ginei me to ano8en emoticon parakalo.....)

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RObiN-HoOD

Ένα μεγάλο μπράβο! Εμένα μου άρεσε πολύ και τη βρίσκω και με τέτοια.

Ωραία συνταγμένο, εύστοχες λέξεις, κοφτερά συναισθήματα.

 

Keep up!

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RaspK

Πολύ ωραίο! Sugoi one! Tres bien! Sehr gut! Και λοιπά, και λοιπά...

 

Όχι, πραγματικά είναι εξαίσιο! ;)

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Elsanor

Αλήθεια τώρα σας άρεσε ρε; Χαίρομαι! :D

 

Αν και δεν πιστεύω ότι τέτοια ποιήματα με εκφράζουν απόλυτα, υπάρχουν κάποιες στιγμές που κανείς αισθάνεται παρόμοια συναισθήματα και κάπως πρέπει να τα βγάλει. Είναι σαν να τα αφήνεις πάνω στο χαρτί και να λυτρώνεσαι κατά κάποιον τρόπο.

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