Elsanor Posted July 18, 2004 Share Posted July 18, 2004 (edited) The lost who is not lost I walk in a dark alley; dumped, littered, filthy. I wear black; only black. My hair flutter unkempt in the evening breeze. I have suffered much, endured even more. Now, I just walk. There were times I fought. And tried not to fall. I loved everyone. Then I hated everyone. Agony and anger in my heart. Now all I want is to be left alone. I have no wish to fight, have abandoned hope. I just walk towards nowhere. And I feel the air through my hair. Embraced my own destruction. Then I hear a child laughing. The happiness in my heart is painful. Transformed by the black despair into agonizing pain. I break. I cry. I wish not to be anymore. I lament my former life, my latter choice. Now, I just walk. A dark figure condemned to wandering. In the very heart of the place I hated most. I let my consciousness spread. I open myself to all feelings from everywhere. I stay there, forever. Lost in the merciful embrace of oblivion… Edited September 5, 2005 by Elsanor Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βάρδος Posted July 19, 2004 Share Posted July 19, 2004 Ελσάνορα, παρατηρώ μια άψογη ανάλυση ψυχοσύνθεσης, αναμιγμένη με ένα εξίσου καλό ύφος γραφής. Επίσης, νομίζω ότι παρατηρώ επιρροές του Βορειοβρόχη. ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
northerain Posted July 19, 2004 Share Posted July 19, 2004 mpa ego den ksero xristo apo poihsh. oraios elsanor... gamato (kati na ginei me to ano8en emoticon parakalo.....) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Management RObiN-HoOD Posted July 20, 2004 Management Share Posted July 20, 2004 Ένα μεγάλο μπράβο! Εμένα μου άρεσε πολύ και τη βρίσκω και με τέτοια. Ωραία συνταγμένο, εύστοχες λέξεις, κοφτερά συναισθήματα. Keep up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RaspK Posted July 20, 2004 Share Posted July 20, 2004 Πολύ ωραίο! Sugoi one! Tres bien! Sehr gut! Και λοιπά, και λοιπά... Όχι, πραγματικά είναι εξαίσιο! ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elsanor Posted July 20, 2004 Author Share Posted July 20, 2004 Αλήθεια τώρα σας άρεσε ρε; Χαίρομαι! Αν και δεν πιστεύω ότι τέτοια ποιήματα με εκφράζουν απόλυτα, υπάρχουν κάποιες στιγμές που κανείς αισθάνεται παρόμοια συναισθήματα και κάπως πρέπει να τα βγάλει. Είναι σαν να τα αφήνεις πάνω στο χαρτί και να λυτρώνεσαι κατά κάποιον τρόπο. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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